Table of contents:
- Introduction and hook/thesis
So, you’ve chosen to write about the use of mobile or cell phones while driving as a persuasive essay. This isn’t as straightforward question as it might appear. While pretty much everyone would agree that mobile or cell phones should never be used as you drive, the situation is a bit more complicated than the demand to just ban cell phones while driving. One of the biggest problems of this case is texting while driving (don’t text and drive!) Consider, for instance, the use of hands-free kits as a compromise – are they just as much of a distraction?
Start off your introduction with a hook that grabs your audience’s attention, then dive into your thesis, or statement of purpose, which should set out the ultimate point you are attempting to persuade people of. See the samples below for some ideas on how to write these.
Hook & Thesis: Driving while using a mobile or cell phone could lose you up to 3 or 4 demerit points, plus make you subject to a costly fine, and that’s not even counting the danger you’re putting yourself into while doing it. If you must use a phone while driving, you should always use a hands-free kit, or better yet, just concentrate on driving, and save yourself the distraction and risk.
Hook & Thesis: Alarmingly, over 42 percent of smartphone users decide that it’s okay to use their phones while driving, according to research by Deloitte in 2015. This dangerous practice puts property and lives at risk for no good reason.
As you carry on into the body of your essay, create an outline of your points, followed by the evidence you’ll use to back up those points. You can use any kind of evidence in persuasive essays, whether that’s anecdotes, stats, or just emotional pleading. It’s up to you. You should have at least three points of evidence in the body of your essay.
Then, as you draw toward the conclusion, make sure you briefly go over all the points you made. This is your last chance to remind your audience of what you are trying to persuade them to do.
End with a call to action, encouraging your readers to take some sort of action based on your persuasiveness, or at least to think about the topic differently from now on. Have a look at the examples below to see some ideas for how to conclude a topic on driving with mobile or cell phones.
Conclusion: As we’ve seen, driving while talking on the phone can be very dangerous. Also, if you’re caught, you can be fined and receive demerit points, which could ultimately get your driver’s license suspended. Avoid all this trouble by only talking on your mobile phone when you are parked out of the way of traffic. It could save your life one day.
Conclusion: The use of a hands-free kit with your mobile phone as you drive doesn’t eliminate risk, as you still might be distracted, but it does help cut it down. Driving a car is dangerous enough without adding still more risk by texting or talking while you drive, so get yourself a hands-free kit today!